I still don't understand
Why you changed so much
You were my hero
I looked up to you
Then that summer
I heard the news
I struggled with it
I did not understand why
God knows your heart
He knows your thoughts
He knows in the end
If you'll return to Him
Using couplets is a nice way to arrange a poem. It makes each thought count. Not using punctuation is another technique that can be effective. (It feels like you're breaking all of the rules!)
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