He gets up to preach
Each and every Sunday
Through the strength of God
Outside the pulpit
He loves to fish
My dad is loving and caring
He has a heart for God
And strives to live for Him
Day after Day
I love my dad
I look up to him
He is my hero
Nice tribute. In free verse you do not have to keep every stanza the same number of lines. In stanza 2, it could be more effective if after the second line (He loves to fish), you begin a new stanza about him being loving and caring. Just a thought!
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